Hello Zyah, I am Alodia from Owairaka school, Auckland. I think it's very cool how you went to 4 places in the holidays. I would never be able to do that! Maybe next time you could change the colour and background for each slide, and you need to check for full stops. Goodbye... 🐢🐀Alodia🐀🐢
I like how you write about your holiday it looked so much fun. I would love to go there.Maybe next time you could make your writing a little bigger. What was your fav place in the holidays. Your writing was really good. I like how you write about it is awesome. Goodbye
Hello Zyah,
ReplyDeleteI am Alodia from Owairaka school, Auckland. I think it's very cool how you went to 4 places in the holidays. I would never be able to do that! Maybe next time you could change the colour and background for each slide, and you need to check for full stops.
Goodbye...
🐢🐀Alodia🐀🐢
Hello Zyah Its Niah from T4
ReplyDeleteI like how you write about your holiday it looked so much fun. I would love to go there.Maybe next time you could make your writing a little bigger. What was your fav place in the holidays. Your writing was really good. I like how you write about it is awesome. Goodbye
thanks niah
ReplyDeleteHi Zyah it's my name is Leon and im at Owairaka school. It's looks like you had a great holiday.
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