Wednesday 28 March 2018

Description sentence week 2!

WALT: write descriptive sentences.

The Nikau Palm is a native tree to New Zealand and it lives in Punakaiki. It has a tall and bumpy trunk and it grows two inches a day. It has spiky leaves and wide leaves. The seeds fall and then grow on the West Coast.


7 comments:

  1. hi Zyah i'm Sathvika

    I really liked how described the Nikau palm.

    my favourite sentence is how you described how tall it grows a every day.

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  2. Kia ora, Kaede here. I Think you did a great job on describing the Nikau palms on the west coast. We did heaps of descriptive writing last term. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Hi Zyah. Its Ella here from T3 again!
    Descriptive writing is really good. I have seen a lot of Nikau Palms in Punikiaki. I didn't know that they grow 2 inches each day thats quite a lot! Our class was working on descriptive writing last term and I liked it a lot.
    Thanks from Ella.

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  4. hello Zyah its Cruz from t2 . I really like your described the the Nikau Palm . good job :)

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  5. kia ora zyah i really enjoyed this post i learnt a lots. what made you want to do a post about the nikau palms? i never knew that they grow 2 inches a day bye now RYlan

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.