Descriptive writing T2

This week in mamaku 1 we have been working on descriptive writing. Mrs Clark gave us a task to look at the picture and describe the picture with nouns,verbs,adjectives and adverbs in the picture.

the best thing about the activity was you had to write a story using the describing words.

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
Broken	Beach	Crashing	loudly
Shipwreck	sea	winter	beautiful
Wandering	night	wrinkled	old
splashing	1988	waves	Leaning

My Paragraph:

Once upon a time in 1988 there were two boats wandering around in the salty sea  water among the wrinkled sand on the beach. the  crashing waves splashing, at them old’ broken parts of the shipwreck last night in winter season of the year.  On a cold and freezing  day of winter. When the snow came out on the island the boats began to sink in the freezing water of the salty sea of animals…….